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Old 15-06-07, 03:33 AM
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Originally Posted by Steve2004 View Post
i thought it was good.

the rhyme scheme was a little strange, but it was good.
I agree. The unusual nature of the rhyme scheme is what made it good. I generally don't care for rhyming poems.
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