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Old 25-09-07, 08:33 AM
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Originally Posted by gartlas View Post
no,no,no.Romantic poetry never ryhmes.It sounds corny and primary schoolish.Not to mention the your ryhmes are terrible anyway :p.try losing the badryhmes and fix the spelling lol.the sentiments good though. good luck with it. ( :


im only 15 gimme a break haha and when i give it her i will make sure all the speelling is correct but that was just a draft ... and ive found loads of love poems that rhyme so they cant b that bad can they :s lol
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