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Old 19-10-07, 05:39 AM
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Originally Posted by cuddlemonster View Post
let me explain my poem.

the words ME AND YOU are on separate lines. those lines happen to have space between them, SPACE. My ex and i were in a 6 year long distance relationship, LONG DISTANCE. the space represents that.

At the end of the word you, is a PERIOD. the period signifies completion of you. with you refering to her, basically she is my completion of searching for love.

in the last line, theres is no period, the "Instead its never" line is open, to symbolize that never is not completed, therefore stating that there is a possibility although never is assumed.

there, for those of you who cant see that there you go, go look at other simple poems out there, check up on ernest hemming ways short stories and you will see so much undiscovered content that only can rediscovered through the most of concentration.
I don't want an explanation of your poem, it's too late. Your poem has to stand for itself, like a joke. Explain a joke, and you've ruined it.
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