Originally Posted by
miSSleepy 
the ladder is a tool, the acid is a tool - I never said traditional tools need to be used. I said tools.
Great, I'm glad you agree. Now, let's extend your argument... you said in your last post that these need to be applied with "proper technique". Tell me, what's the 'proper technique for throwing paint onto a canvas?
You're not convincing anyone here Missy, least of all me. Esp when I know your posts are coming from the background of these kinds of gems:
poetry is not for one person
Simply wrong. And you contradicted yourself later on this.
your little work up there is the epitome of creativeness I bet.
Condescending sarcasm.
Until you give me a reason why your poem is any good... you're going to be a total ignoramus.
Direct insults. You say you are in education? God, I hope you don't motivate your students this way.
no poetic technique except for one useless rhyme.
Puts downs.
Yes, I would say you have a definite box problem. Here's some food for thought, Missy. You could have said what you thought was *good* about his poem & then made suggestions about how to make it better.
Come to think of it, why don't you post some of your own stuff on here? There's at least a couple of published authors on here (including myself). Let's see if you can take as good as you give. Show everyone evidence of your talent & knowledge.
No? I thought not.