nice, good message, but a little to preachy... the message is great, but the delivery of it could've been better. i found it too sudden. i thought the climax was when the speech was about the time he was helped... which would've been a great ending, but the second climax of the suicide just threw the tone a little off. really good though, to the point that i don't feel like writing a story anymore, i've lost confidence after reading this one, we'll see what happens