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Old 06-04-08, 10:16 PM
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Originally Posted by Fallen Angel View Post
Hey i made up this poem i think the begining is weak and i need help to rhyme it please help. thanks.

I asked for a rose, God gave me a bouquet.
I asked for a minute, God gave me a hour.
I asked for love, God gave me that too.
I asked for a angel, and god gave me you.
This put a smile on my face.. Thanks its perfect.
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