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Old 05-04-05, 09:44 PM
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i LIKE this. (I couldn't capitalise the first "I" because I needed to emphasize the "like", and I figured that I might as well not capitalise the "t" in "this" to make it that much more emphasized)

"And I'd remember
we'd laugh together
over our anecdotes
as I weep idely
over our memories"


I liked this the best. Aww.. It is sad. But it makes me wonder who Joe was? =/

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Originally Posted by Only-virgins
It doesn't even rhym well!
Eh. But not all poems have to rhyme.
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