Originally Posted by bohemiandonut
It's rather repetitive, but decent nonetheless.
I don't understand the "died before you woke bit." What is the "death" you speak of? And what is the awakening? You're too vague for anyone to really grasp that symbolism.
I see potential though, keep writing. Never stop.
Peace.
It's not meant to please anyone, it's for me
You will die before you wake. You will destroy everything before you realise what you're doing. You will turn on yourself, on all your friends, you will hate me and everything, before you become enlightened.
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Death is like sex in highschool, because if you knew how many times you missed it, you'd be paralyzed.