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Old 09-05-05, 03:31 AM
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Trusted You
I wrote this poem a few days ago. tell me what you think of it.

I trusted you with my heart
You always have treated it well
But now you take advantage of your power
And you take my heart into your fists
Gently squeezing
Testing out how hard you can squeeze before it gives out
Pushing the limits too frequently
You took it too far this time
Now you look at my lifeless heart lying in your hand
You feel guilty because it was your fault
But know that all it takes to bring it back
Is to unclench your fist
And let us continue on
So unclench it
And watch the blood rush throughout it
Bringing it back to life
Bringing me back to you
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