You Don't Deserve Me

[DragonPoet]

You Don't Deserve Me - DragonPoet

When our eyes first met
I knew I owe heaven my debt
Together we were perfect
I thought this could not be wreaked
Wrong I was to think
As I discovered you loved to drink
Things between us got bad
I wasn't happy, I was sad
I was their for you no mater what
I tried to help you in any rut
What thanks do I get out of all this?
Nothing but insults and dis
Take a good look at this face
No more time I will waste
Don't even try to plea
You don't deserve me

[JHW]

I like it

[Lloyd95]

I liked it 'cause it rhymed.

the present is even more powerful than the past, you just have to learn rather than regret my son.

[pinkpanther111]

I like you poem, can relate to those thoughts.

[Frasbee]

It's eh.

(that's me being nice)

[RSK]

You Don't Deserve Me - DragonPoet

When our eyes first met - your eyes met, and had a conversation?
I knew I owe heaven my debt - how much did God loan you? does he/she charge interest?Together we were perfect - and alone you were just....normal?
I thought this could not be wreaked - i thought a lot of things...Wrong I was to think - ok, you are beginning to sound like yodaAs I discovered you loved to drink - needed something to rhyme with think, huh?Things between us got bad - ok...
I wasn't happy, I was sad - yeah, because most people are happy when things go badI was their for you no mater what - mkay...I tried to help you in any rut - rhymes with hutWhat thanks do I get out of all this? - uh oh, things heading down hill...Nothing but insults and dis - dis and this, i likeTake a good look at this face - okNo more time I will waste - good for youDon't even try to plea - i would've gone with, 'From you I will Flee'You don't deserve me - i would've gone with 'God, I must pee'

[vashti]

Quote:

Originally Posted by RSK

[/b]Take a good look at this face - [b]

Take a good look at my face
You know my smile looks out of place
If you look closer it's easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

Baby, baby baby....



I liked the love poems Lloyd wrote for shh! better.

[artyemi]

I like green eggs and ham..

[Hugo Pickle]

i like it dragon poet

[confused01]

i like you peom so much it expresses everything i went true in my last relationship you are so good. i like this one better than the new one.
good job