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Old 19-05-06, 09:28 PM
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ive never written a poem in my life, so go easy on me, i wrote this for the girl i love, but she will never get to see it.



from that night we met, when i first saw you
there was something special, that i knew.
the first kiss we had that night
sent my heart into flight.

every night in the spare room
was when our love started to bloom,
my love for you was growing and growing, day by day,
just like those times when you used to say,
"i miss you i love you, me and you, we will be together for eternity,
through and through"

but now so sudden you are different,
why have you lost all your commitment?
now the things you say and the things you do
make me feel so down and blue.

all i want is for you to come back to me,
your not the girl you used to be.
where has that girl i loved so much go?
why are things moving so slow?

im not normally the guy to cry,
but this time, i want to die.
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Sorry man sounds like crappy situation. People change and it isnt always for the best sadly. Maybe talk to her? But on a happy note, I liked the poem and it's flow of words.
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Yeah, I can totally relate to that poem.
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nice poem!
I recon some of the situations ...
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im not normally the guy to cry,
but this time, i want to die.
neither was i my friend neither was i. but you must battle on. you must.
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Old 17-06-06, 02:53 AM
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:'( argh reminds me of some of my bad situatios, on the other hand its very nice
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I feel sorry for you but I'm a real critic when it comes to poems, yours sucks
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Old 18-06-06, 08:54 PM
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*sigh* your real nice Zyx, its what it means to him, when i see your poems published in a book i think you can criticise untill then..
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Old 18-06-06, 09:30 PM
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I haven't published any poems, I'm writing a book though.
At least I told him I felt sorry for him. Maybe I shouldn't have posted at all but that "poem" hurt my eyes and I felt I needed to insult it. Maybe I should write a poem about that. I'll try to be more considerate next time.
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Old 18-06-06, 09:48 PM
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Good ive wrote one too but im too embarrassed to post it!, what would Elke think if she saw that!!!?
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If she saw what?
By the way, you should have written "Good, I've written..."
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