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Old 31-05-06, 04:23 PM
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In the poignant shadows of doom
With tears streaked, numb inside
Despondent thoughts did loom
Anguish never let a smile reside
At once, in the tormenting state
Arose the sole desperate craving-
A person I could always crate
Amidst all the atrocious inciting
Consoling , soothing were his words
For eternity he succeeded in the magic
Laugh and delight approached in herds
Rinsing away the moment so tragic
His moves made me feel special
Without me perceiving, he’d conquered my soul
I was free, out of the nutshell
When around he was, standing all tall
I recognized in me, the sturdy lure
Still I was zipped, hushed and quiet
For he, I thought, wasn’t sure
So for the instant, I left the matter aside
Permitting the wind to follow its way
Or it parts me, from him with a sway
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Damn...that poem and that pic...reminds me of something.
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