From Mystery

Have you ever been fascinated
by one who's words drew
thought and emotions
that penetrate you?

You find yourself looking
and can't look away
the harder you try
the more that gaze stays

Riveted here
where you want it to be
cause you know that there's something
you just have to see

As you listen so close
and you start to wonder
what would it be like
to be falling under

A spell that so magic
spun by the sound
of voice who's rich warmth
is spreading on down

Have you ever experienced
instantaneous connection
till all your thoughts move
in just one direction

Others just long
for that one kiss
and you find yourself
wishing that same wish

Your mind is amazing
when you really let it go
you find yourself picturing
...mmm... you know

As the warmth of that voice
takes on a glow
spreading and pulsing
where you want it to go

I will tell you all you desire

Me.. I know

You step out of what was
invited, slipped inside
it feels like warm rain
between your sighs

Its no longer important
that you then find
all inhibitions
are left far behind

As you recall how it feels
to be so in love
and you see that image, of us
[*pointing up*]
up above

You see at last
who you've finally found
what you've looked for and longed for
has finally come round

oh, that was damn good....

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everything happens for a reason...beginning to wonder why.

I like it, well put.

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My New Car!! Cardomain!

"Be Mindful of The Future, But Not At The Expense of The Moment"

"Life is the art of drawing without an eraser"

Thats a poem to seduce a girl with... I've done it 1x to success and 0x to failure. Know when to do this though and to whom. And the pitch, the speed, and how you modulate your voice are key.

MVP.. don't think you could fail with that.. I'd do you.. lol
Nice writing...








ps... I AM KIDDING...

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"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... yours truly
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir

Wow MVP. I'd do you if you spit that poem out around me. . .

Thanks Alexi, I was hoping for that.

see I knew there was something special about you MVP...
looks like you've got the attention of both sexes....

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everything happens for a reason...beginning to wonder why.

a true .."playa"....

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"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... yours truly
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir

How about Don Juan?

Or Pick Up Artist?

Or P.I.M.P.?

I think I should add more sexual hints and undertones in the poem.

Your theme song...

" I dont know what ya heard about me... ... .. ... your messin with a P.I.M.P!"

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"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... yours truly
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir

????

Wha'chu say, white girl? "Messin' wit a P.I.M.P.?" You must mean "that I'm a mother****ing P.I.M.P."

well.. I am a mod... shesh... I have to watch what I say!

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"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... yours truly
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir

Tis true, tis true.

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My New Car!! Cardomain!

"Be Mindful of The Future, But Not At The Expense of The Moment"

"Life is the art of drawing without an eraser"

MVP you got your game, it's in your name now! A true Player man!!!
with the attitude of knowing when and where to stop or start in your case...
P.I.M.P I agreee!!!!
Hey wheres your pole in your room???lol
Jane and I wanna try it!!!!

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everything happens for a reason...beginning to wonder why.