when the warmth was gone
and the ocean disappeared
and snow danced silently to the ground
my heart peeked in a window at you

you asked me if it was worth it,
to walk the streets of narsche with you
and risk everything we had
just for me and you

and we climbed out the window
when the sun stopped shining
and clouds laughed above us
while spilling stringent rain
and i stood outside to see you
one last time
and I watched you turn to stone

and this night has come
and i pack my thoughts up in a box
wishing you weren't gone
wishing every tear i cried for you
would bring you back at dawn

Wow. I really liked this one. Usually I cringe when I see someone has posted a poem.

Lilwing, someday I hope you dedicate a CD to us here at LF. You're going to write wonderful songs. I know it.

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I think all women really want is to be proven wrong about men.

That's really sweet of you.

I've thought about a loveforum rig, but I have doubts about being a fulltime musician. I might do music on the side.

Thanks for reading and the input!