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01-03-04, 09:45 AM
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| | | I Loved You Once Dreams of places far away..
Thoughts come back from that day.
Stars shine ever so bright..
Why did I leave that cold night?
I remember you sitting,
asking me please.
Stopped in time,
Like somone said, "freeze!".
You shared your thoughts, hopes, and fears,
and I drove away in tears.
Your eyes full of sorrow,
with no thoughts of tomorrow.
All I wanted,
was your strength to borrow.
I have many thoughts and questions of that night,
I often wish,
You just might.
We shared a love,
that was strong.
Even if it wasn't,
all that long.
Days go by,
and I try to let go.
Everytime I think of you,
the tears just flow.
I know one day,
you will forgive and forget.
But right now,
I am full of regret.
As time goes by,
I feel like a dunce.
All I know,
is that I loved you once.
Written by.. yours truly.. Jane
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01-03-04, 08:10 PM
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| | | that was beautiful, Jane! | |
01-03-04, 11:46 PM
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"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... yours truly
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir
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02-03-04, 12:36 AM
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| | Wow, that was awesome...good job
I'm due for another poem, but all my dreams have been dark as of late, I need a little light in my life.
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02-03-04, 01:45 AM
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| | thank ya again.. not as good as yours but Im no writer.
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"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... yours truly
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir
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02-03-04, 02:05 AM
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| | Remember sweetheart...poetry is not a comparision, its an expression 
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02-03-04, 08:50 AM
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"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... yours truly
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir
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02-03-04, 10:25 AM
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| | | hey that sounds like i feel right now...are you reading my mind girl? whew, that was awesome... can I borrow that one?
Innova? sweetie? how can Jane and I get you out of this?
Youve got such a great personality...what's going on?
Ya know one day things will happen right? When youre ready or when youre least expecting it?
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everything happens for a reason...beginning to wonder why.
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02-03-04, 10:52 PM
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| | | You two being there for me is enough, been so great to be able to talk to people like yourselves.
I know one day, something good will happen, I'm long overdue lol...
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