Would appreciate any feedback you might have... I might actually read this...Wanting her to be happy, but don't want her to get hurt, don't want to hurt her myself, i love her so that i just want her to be happy... is it emphasized enough? I don't feel it expresses what i want to say exactly where it burns in your head.
Thoughts on what i could do or say or wording? Thanks...



It pains me so when I see you sad
It pains me so when I see you mad
It hurts so much when I see you cry
It just makes me want to die

Oceans of thoughts drift through me
How much I Love You, I truly see
You are my everything, have no doubt
But you seeing things for yourself is what it's all about

I really don't want you to get hurt
But it's all these thoughts, feelings, and curiosity I understand you must exert
Thoughts of others doing you wrong pains me so
But hurt you myself I will not do though

My Love for you is everlasting
I want you to know that you can come to me for anything
If happiness comes from pushing my Love away
Then I really have nothing else to say...

But...I Love You...

*walks away*

what are you trying to say?

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Good poem man.

He's trying to say how much he has love for this women, but in the end must walk away for he does not want to end up hurting her or otherwise something similar.

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