The day.......

[mevin]

I still remember the day,

The day I saw you for the last time.

I did have a lot to say,

But I knew I could not make you mine.

While going you did not turn back to see me,

And I left in silence with my secret.

God surely did not hear my plea.

Perhaps what we want, we do not always get.

Now please tell me what shall I do?

If you had given me one chance only,

Perhaps I would not be so far from you.

And together we would make a nice story.

But unluckily, it is already the end.

I don not even remember the beginning.

I might try how much I can.

But I know that I will not be able to stop loving.

I might forget everything,

But I still remember the day,

The day I saw you for the last time.

[gartlas]

It'squite cool,I like your style of writing,its refreshing to see something new

[eXeSSum]

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Originally Posted by gartlas

It'squite cool,I like your style of writing,its refreshing to see something new

i agree 2nd one i read nd thinked about

where re youre love poems that show love can be wonderfull

idd love to see poems that involve different parts of life hope to see more of you


greets eXeSSum

[JmB CooL]

nice poem really.
i can know a little english but i understand you.For peom thank you