my poem.. :)

[oreada]

hello everybody! i'm new here
and this is my first post.. and my
first poem here so here goes :

a dream come true

u're somewhere near,
my lover, my friend, my dear,
i can almoust feel ur lips
kissing mine,
and my heart trembles
with a love divine.

throughout the day,
throughout the night,
i wonder,
is this feeling right?
am i suppose 2 wait
and be patient and calm,
how do i know that
all this isn't wrong?

i ignore all doubts,
and wait 4 u all life through,
u have to exist,
who else is gonna make my
dreams come true?

... well that was the poem, hope u liked it! ...

[squirrley]

awww...that was great! Keep it up!

[BillyGalbreath]

great poem and great quote ! I am so gonn ause that quote too - lol

[oreada]

thanks guys.. that means a lot