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Old 25-05-04, 05:44 AM
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To my one and only Tom,

It's too hard to explain in words how I feel, but I'll try
I'll try my best to tell you, in letters, words, my love for you

This letter, poem, however you may name it
It's to tell you like I always often do
Is that I love you with anything there is
More than my heart itself, more than life itself
I never thought I would know what love is, but I do now
All thanks to you, I've fallen for you, I am in love with you
Everyone says you can only fall in love once, but that's not true
Everytime I hear your voice, I fall in love all over again

It hurts me to see you cry, to see your tears run
Sometimes it worries me, pains me, but no matter what the reason is
I will always be here for you, in your arms, holding you close
Looking deep into your eyes, always make me feel so loved
Kiss me and smile for me, tell me what you want from me
Hold me like you'll never let me go, everybody needs somebody

You're always in my mind, everything I do, I do for you
I myself can not imagine my life without you
Not anymore, no, you are a big part of my life, you are my life
And I hope that will never change, I don't want it to ever
My life, my world was black and white until the day
You walked through my life and into my heart
Take my hand and we'll make it together forever, I swear

Nobody can feel the way I feel about you
They think they do, but they don't see or feel this
They're just jealous because we're young and in love
Love's more than just a feeling, they wouldn't know that
You and me were meant to be, you make life worth living
Every dream you made come true, for all the love I found in you
I'll be forever thankful, you're the one who held me up
Never letting me fall, you're the one who saw me through it all

Sometimes at night, I can't drift to sleep, can't go off to dream of you
Instead I lay in my bed twisting and turning, cold and alone
You weren't by my side, you were not here, keeping me safe and warm
There's not a day or night where I don't dream or think about you
Your name is carved everywhere, on paper, the sky, in my heart
My heart is yours to fill or burst, to break
Or bury or wear as jewellery, Whichever you prefer

If I happen to be gone one day, please don't ever forget me
It hurts me to know that I won't see you today or tomorrow
But I'll always be with you, watching over you
You gave me wings and you made me fly, I'm here
I'm your angel in the sky and you are mine too
You're heaven sent, god made you for me to love you
I will hold you in my heart until I can hold you in my arms again
Read this over and over, so that you know my love for you is true

My life is yours to love, ruin, save or hurt
Whatever you may want to do with it, no matter what
I will never stop loving you, my love, my life, me, I'm yours
You are always here for me whenever I needed someone
You go through everything with me, most of the times for me
You saw the best there was in me, you gave me faith because you believe
I'm everything I am, because you love me

Your Skye
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Old 25-05-04, 06:10 AM
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VERY Sweet Skye-great writing gal!
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Old 25-05-04, 06:19 AM
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I like what it says - but its not a poem to me - At least I wouldnt consider it a poem - I think all poetry must have some kind of rhyming system. This work has no rhyming at all.

Just my two cents - but yes - it is nice Skye.
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poetry doesnt have to ryhme Billy.
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meh - it does to me - lol
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ok so to you it does...
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Poetry is depth of feeling...

Its about meaning, not ryhming (although its fun to work with and fun to hear).
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I agree with Innova. Although I wouldn't say it's fun to work with.. LoL.. I find it bloomin' hard.. that's one reason why I would or want to write a rhymin' Poem.. Well.. that's just me really..
By the way.. Thanks guys. I'm glad you liked it.
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