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Old 01-07-04, 02:00 PM
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My Second Song "Broken" (Lyrics)
Well as you all know, I've been trying to expand my writing even further, you've all seen my first song, I believe posted a month or so back. But anyhoo without further ado, here is my second song, Broken. *Special Thanks to Jane*

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[V1]
Every night I walk the stars, and
In my dreams, I'm in an apptitude of illusion
Wondering where you are and when
Your coming home?

The laughter in your voice echos in my mind.
Hearing happiness in yesterdays light,
Crashing into tomorrows sadness,
And all of this silences the screams from my heart
And bleeds into the nights shadow...

[C1]
I'm falling, into twillight of shattered emotion
Slamed to the ground, reaching for your hand
But I can't seem to see you any more.
You fell below the anchor,
And now your just a blurred vision of a past utopia.
So I have to move forward and limp away.

[v2]
Stumbling down past a sacred sancuary,
The building piece of a fairy tale,
Is nothing more then a haunting cemetary of lingering memories.
Memories of innocence that turned,
And faded away in the distance.

In some ways, my body feels torn inside
But this life is the way you play it out
It hurts to see the agony in those angelic eyes
But I have to look forward,
Or else you'll consume me.

[C2-Final] [x2]
I'm falling, into twillight of shattered emotion
Slamed to the ground, reaching for your hand
But I can't seem to see you any more.
You fell below the anchor,
And now your just a blurred vision of a past utopia.
So I have to move forward and limp away.

I'm falling, I'm falling
I'm falling into twillight of shattered emotion.

But now, I have to move forward and limp away.

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I hope you all enjoyed it. Let me know what ya think, is it an improvement from the first song? Anyhoo it's off to bed for me, catch ya all later. Peace!
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Old 01-07-04, 02:09 PM
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Holy crap Innova. That was GREAT!!! Just when you've amazed me with your talent, you push the bar. Awesome song!
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You know I would say youve come a long way from 8 months ago! How time flies. Innova-youve got so much emotion within you and i think its wonderful youre able to recoginize it and use it towards something people can enjoy and for yourself too!

Someday youre going to find it within you too that you were able to walk away with head held high and not limping my friend. I know you sweetie and know youve got the strength to walk with with pride and true happiness.

IT is truly amazing to watch you grow.
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thanks for the shout out ... .. but honestly Innova.. the words are yours.. I didnt do anything.. your the one with the talent.
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