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Old 01-09-04, 05:44 PM
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2nd attempt...
I wander in the busy city
Losing my way in it, how shitty
Every single day I am looking
For the smile I see in my memory

But I know we just cannot be together
Because you think I do not matter
So now I wish the one meant for me
Is just down this very alley

I've been looking and looking
But I can't find anyone
Who is nearly as good as you
Why can't you just be more accepting?

This world is everchanging and makes us feel so insignificant
Let us just be lovers, before this game leaves us both burnt?
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Old 02-09-04, 12:26 AM
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Again GB, you have captured an emotion forever in this poem. Well done!
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