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Old 14-01-05, 06:17 AM
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Scenes from a Shower
Scenes from a Shower

The hot steam
from the thundering shower
created a misty veil
but not so thick
it clouds the fire in your eyes
a secret white world
just we two
the hunger in mine as I slip my hands exploring down your thighs
Happy explorers on your slippery flesh
i dig my nails in
my smiles curling like a contented cat's and yours
like some demon
thinking of some new delightful sin
As I sink to my kneees and with thirsting lips ...
taking you in

Your moans echo of the shower walls
not entirely drownedby the pulsing rain
of shower and bubly soap
my throat murrmurring in refrain
gobbling your delicious #*@=
as i dig my nails futher in
your hands wrap my wet slick hair
and you pull me closer to you
your hips bucking foward
as I drink deeper of you
No noserferatu
could be as happy sucking as I
my lips touching pubic hair
I hear your wild cry
and drink deep ...drink deep the creamy life force
worshiping on my knees
and with loving slippery tongue
you're the god I try to please
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oh so you do jerk off! Great! Then why are you sometimes such a grump?
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nice poem!!
although im not good at grading poems but i can tell u this is damn good dude. so horny lo this poem haha maybe i give to my gf lol
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First poem I've read on this site in MONTHS. Nice. Although I could've done without the "I dig my nails in" line . . .
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