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12-01-05, 05:19 AM
|  | Annette Skye | | Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: South East London Borderline Kent
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| | | Unlocked Seduction Shattered heart to pieces, broken scaborous wings
Suicide locks, a beautiful part and pretty slit scars
Blood soaked sins tightens around my scarified body
Wrapping me, squeezing me into tiny ugly segments
I dream I've dreamt, a thousand times before
Was the only thing I loved, a dream, a dream of pain
Immortality has taken over me, secrets unlocked
Leading life without a soul to live, my black hole
A dusty little puppet, too weak to fly
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12-01-05, 05:25 AM
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Once again, I love this one babe. You have some good writing skills!
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12-01-05, 05:27 AM
| | Annette Skye | | Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: South East London Borderline Kent
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| | | Only SOME good writing skills...! Not as amazing as you though babe! | |
12-01-05, 05:30 AM
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| | Why thank you, but in my opinion..this is better then quite a couple of mine!
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12-01-05, 05:34 AM
| | Annette Skye | | Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: South East London Borderline Kent
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| | | Pffft, whateeeever! Hehehe!
We're having exactly the same convo as we had before! Hehehe! | |
12-01-05, 06:11 AM
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| | | This is true rofl.
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13-01-05, 06:24 PM
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| | | well as everyone knows i never browse in the poetry section but the title did catch my eyes. unlocked seduction huh?? honestly it sounds like a piece where you got raped or something. dammit i knew you were into that bondage crap, lucky innova i guess. well here goes...
locked in chains, outside rain, dulls the sounds of screams, only in my dreams
could i ever pretend, pain as pleasure, not a means to an end
nor do you defend, against the whips and leather, brazilian feathers
are supposed to tickle, but your pickle, is locked in a vice, your life
flashes before your eyes in the candle light, the sight, of a room barely lit, SIT
as your master commands you, tells you to lick her shoe
this bondage has placed a spell, your soul you would sell
because you pleasure, different erotica you do measure
the hot wax sends endorphines, metamorphing
straight to the brain, unlocked by pain
a new seduction has been set free, your ejaction without any pussy
something off the top of my head. enjoy.
raverboy
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13-01-05, 11:57 PM
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| | | u never cease to amaze !!!!!
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14-01-05, 05:24 AM
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| | | Just kinda freaked me out. I was having a good day too...
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18-01-05, 11:52 AM
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| | | the title got me too. i was like "ooooh there's naught stuff goin' on up in here."
that was nice. totally depressing, but nice. | |
31-01-05, 04:09 PM
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| | | Ahh well, I always put random titles for my poem which has nothing to do with the poem. Like most people with their songs. Hehehe! | | Loveforum Breaktime | | | | Loveforum also recommend - Green tea - Help in weight loss and decrease rate of getting cancer.
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