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Old 15-06-05, 07:00 AM
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Song- "What has Begun"
This came out more like a song than a poem so...meh! Ive decided to call it "What has begun" and its about confussion and stuffs. Its not some cheesy pop thing lol so don't look at it in that sort of manner. Oh and I know Its not very good because im just not very good at this sort of thing. I just wrote down how im feeling.
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My world...
Has been torn apart
Everday...
Is a chance, for a new start
But then...
It means leaving you behind
And I can't...
But you're not even mine

And I feel so confused
not sure what im to do
lost without a clue
and im still thinking about you
....and what has begun

what has begun ?
what has begun?

Can't run...
Theres no way out of here
And im scared
And it hurts
Theres just so much I fear...
...yes I fear

Won't go back
Im too far gone
a bond?
You know you feel it,
im not the only one

And I feel so confused
not sure what im to do
lost without a clue
and im still thinking about you
....and what has begun

What has begun?
Please let me know what has begun?
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Old 17-06-05, 11:11 PM
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Cherika that was pretty nice song to share it here
thnx a lot!
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Ooo..

Sounds really sad.

err..

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I liked it very much.
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