Jumping on the band wagon - Love Forum

Steve2004 · #1 (**permalink**) 01-08-05, 11:30 AM

alright, this poem was in fact inspired by Phantom of the Opera..if it's not terribly obvious. not one of my better ones...

BUT ANYWAY HERE IT IS

I have a mind to avoid him
I have an eye to glance.
The mystery of his existance
Left my will without a chance.

Dressed in black and masked.
I wonder what lies behind.
His heart and eyes, and lips,
and mouth, i have a heart to find.

His voice ignites desires.
His touch sends eager chills.
I feel him in my mind and heart.
He holds the hand that kills.

turned toward the light that blinds me,
It's from his eyes, i see.
And when i'm wounded at the heart,
He's the one that bleeds.

And when his eyes burn into mine,
A breath i cannot take.
A struggle i give up willingly,
From these arms i dare not escape.

#2 (**permalink**) 01-08-05, 11:41 AM

I like it :)

Now I really REALLY wanna see that movie

#3 (**permalink**) 01-08-05, 11:20 PM

I read it this morning at work - and I like it even more ;p

Frasbee · #4 (**permalink**) 02-08-05, 01:44 AM

Eh, I don't like the Phantom of the opera...

misombra · #5 (**permalink**) 02-08-05, 01:56 AM

and the phantom of the opera doesn't like you either!

shh! · #6 (**permalink**) 02-08-05, 02:39 AM

Nice love poem. Are you gay?

#7 (**permalink**) 02-08-05, 02:42 AM

Steve is a she!!

whaywardj · #8 (**permalink**) 02-08-05, 03:37 AM

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Originally Posted by Tone

Steve is a she!!

So a picture might lead you believe. Could be he putting up a she. Never know.

#9 (**permalink**) 02-08-05, 03:38 AM

Nah - I've chatted with her. A guy couldn't fake that kind of cuteness.

Plus she takes a lot of pictures! Hmm next time I talk to her I'll have her take a picture that says "Hi Tony" on a piece of paper or written on her hand. Then we'll know the TRUTH....