In the town where I was born,
Lived a man who sailed to sea,
And he told me of his life,
In a yellow Submarine,

He would sail all the way,
All alone beneath the tide,
And he forgot about his life,
The one he led with his wife,

Many years had passed along,
He became lost and then was gone,
And I said to him Hello,
He was one - lonely fellow,

He drifted far - all the way,
Memories drained day by day,
Today he is beneath the rocks
Where the Gods have his docks,

In the Ocean is where he died,
Many years - he once had strived,
Although forgotten - he'll never be,
This man I knew - he sailed to sea,


LOL - I honestly don't know how this poem sounds - I just started writing kind of like freestyle (if you will). I'll just submit, and see what it turns out as. In case you didn't notice - the first paragraph is from a Beatles song!

my clients at work can write better poetry.

Gee - thanks for your heartwarming (as always) post, misombre.

Hey Hey don't get so defensive.. what if she works at a clinic for poetry? Where only the best poets come around and show samples of their work?

Wouldn't feel that bad then would you?!

Tone - you always come up with the craziest things - which is probably why your the most likeable person on SDN (well second to CYBORG - hehehe - I LOVE MESSIN' WITH HIM).

Actually that was really bad.

So this guy gets lost as sea and then you say to him hello?

Riiiight...

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OK - CLEARLY PEOPLE HAVE NO TASTE IN TRUE MUSIC

First - Listen to the song by 'the beatles' - yellow submarine

The song is a classic!

If you all knew a little history of rock and roll (the beatles), you would read this poem in a different light!

I hate that song.

And I don't like the beatles.

But regardless if I like the beatles or not.

I really hate that song.

Way to rip off your material from a bad song.

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If it wasn't for the beatles, your favourite rock n' roll star probably would never had even existed, Fras!

The Beates started it all, man. Back when things were free, when marijuana was a drug to clear your mind, you nomad. lol.

The Beatles ROCK!

rsk i agree with you. the beatles are great and those who don't like them just don't understand.

"i need love, love, love..."

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"Ogres are like onions."

all you need is love, love, love,

love is all you need.................

"to ease my mind, I need to find, find, someone to call mine, but momma said..."

Phil!!!!!!!!!

what do you all think about the john lennon song, GOD?

If it wasn't for the war of 1812 I doubt the Beatles would've existed either.

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