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Old 30-04-03, 03:49 AM
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rhymes
damn, i didn't know they had one of these sections.. maybe i should put up a rhyme and tell me what you think


My saying, about this game we are playing
Realization is a bitch, but maybe we have to switch
Our train of thought, and hit it on the spot
Never mind beating around the bush, don’t hide and push
You’re real feelings away, or let them stray
Far from the truth, keep it fresh like youth
So I’ll get cut the chase, negative emotion we should erase
Let them escape to a place
Where we can’t see, just let them be
In the back of our minds eternally

As the saying goes, let those that oppose
My phrase, remain in daze
Cuz until you realize what you actually are,
You probably remain far
From the truth you seek, so chill and flow to my beat

When I turn around and look behind, hey I ain’t blind
My past ain’t the best, many times I was put up to the test
And failed, my train of thought, derailed
Dumb actions that I did, just fuct around like a kid
Stupid things that I’ve said, hey I just want to get you into bed
It’s dumb but it’s the truth, so do I remain in my youth?
Nah **** that, grow up, and maybe I’ll show up
With better results to display, better actions to convey
The new ideas I should’ve learned, memories not burned
Scarred by wrong actions, only outcome being dissatisfaction
Disapprove would stare back at me, unknowingly
I did not see, the obvious that stood at hand,
Why didn’t I wake up and understand
Maybe change my game plan

As the saying goes, let those that oppose
My phrase, remain in daze
Cuz until you realize what you actually are,
You probably remain far
From the truth you seek, so chill and flow to my beat

Now finally, in verse 3, hopefully
I woke up and now I can see
Open them eyes, only to visualize
Maybe, it’s the personality, I should change
Entirely rearrange, to solve misconception
Not to lead to deception, but to obtain convection
Of positive images and emotion, complete devotion
If they deserve, then only the finest I will serve
But never mind all this dreaming, wake up and start dealing
With the situation now, first maybe I should learn now
To alter a little differently, unconsciously
The actions when I get possessed, I’m not my best
I poison enters my body, ultimately not able to be
Where I want to be, sober from drinking insanely


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Old 30-04-03, 06:37 AM
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When did they make this section of the forum?
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Just setup yesterday. hey raver, your rhyme is very meaningful. I like it.
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hummm interesting.
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don't tell me raverboy composed it.
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but of course.... raverboy
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