Originally Posted by Sami09
Christmas is coming(1) is everyone getting excited (2). Are you guys last minutes shopping or do you like to be early(3). Christmas is serious(4) the best time of year. We got snow last nite(5) here. Let(6) not forget the (7)christmas treats like the cookies every year (8)we make does everyone else do that.
(1) Lack of punctuation.
(2) Incorrect punctuation.
(3) Incorrect punctuation.
(4) *seriously
(5) *night
(6) *Let's
(7) *Christmas
(8) Sentence gets totally ****ed up at this point. Consider revising.
Originally Posted by Sami09
vasti(1) how old is your daughter(2). It just seen(3) like everyone wants ipog(4) now but they are for(5)sure pricey. How old is your son(6) (7)is he younger(8) (9)and just isn(10)t sure what he wants yets(11).(12)
(1) *Vashti, or *bitch
(2) Incorrect punctuation.
(3) *seems
(4) *iPod
(5) *for sure, but you should use "but they sure are"
(6) Lack of punctuation.
(7) Capitalize. See (6).
(8) Lack of punctuation.
(9) Sentence gets totally ****ed up at this point. Consider revising.
(10) *isn't
(11) "Yets?" Are you ****ing stupid?
(12) Kill yourself.
Originally Posted by Sami09
For me (1)i want a digital camera.
(1) Anything before this point is unnecessary and needs to be removed. Capitalize. And while you're at it, quit your job as a custodian and go back to elementary school.